He recognized her at once by her gait. She always had a distinct gait for a woman and he always used that to make her out in a crowd. Its been 6 years since he last saw her. She has changed quite a bit in that time. If not for her walk he would have missed her. She had put on a bit of weight, he always used to tell her that she was too skinny and she would look prettier with few more pounds. Her coiffure looks a bit different, more trendy than what she used to have. She was sporting this capri and a black T . He has always remembered her wearing a salwar. Its amazing how you always have a picture of people in your mind, how you capure their existence in your memories and expect them to remain that way for eternity.
The memory of their first meeting is still fresh in his mind. How he had accosted her and though she was hesitant initially it dint take long for her to open up. He has always wondered at his ability to accost any stranger especially women and within minutes make them feel at home. They discussed everything under sun. She devised a point system to see how many of their interests match and they kept count of it for a couple of days but after that it was too much of an effort to maintain it. He still chuckles when he thinks of what her first impression of his was. She thought he was just one of those women chasers. They both laughed when she told him this.
He had liked many women before he met her but with those women it was always the physical attraction. She was the first woman with whom the physical aspect never entered his mind not that she wasnt pretty but somehow he was never able to find a satisfactory answer as to why so. One fine day he told her that he loved her. He hadnt planned for a proper proposal with a red rose and a mushy card which was the norm then but he simply told that he loves her when she asked why he was so lost for past few days. She dint agree to the proposal, he was adamant, she was depressed he was not giving it up, he couldnt see her depressed, he gave up, she came back but he couldnt. After that they grew apart and gradually lost touch.
Now here she was, the only woman he ever loved. He was never able to love any other woman, he never even tried to. He dint wanna get married for the sake of it and fool himself and the woman he would marry. He did enjoy being a bachelor but there are nights when he wished she was there with him. He was curious as to how her life might have shaped up. He wanted to know how she was doing. He paced quickly towards her and when he was a couple of yards away from her, he called "Hey Sweets, is that you ?"
P.S - I promise to post the part 2 in the next couple of days.
The memory of their first meeting is still fresh in his mind. How he had accosted her and though she was hesitant initially it dint take long for her to open up. He has always wondered at his ability to accost any stranger especially women and within minutes make them feel at home. They discussed everything under sun. She devised a point system to see how many of their interests match and they kept count of it for a couple of days but after that it was too much of an effort to maintain it. He still chuckles when he thinks of what her first impression of his was. She thought he was just one of those women chasers. They both laughed when she told him this.
He had liked many women before he met her but with those women it was always the physical attraction. She was the first woman with whom the physical aspect never entered his mind not that she wasnt pretty but somehow he was never able to find a satisfactory answer as to why so. One fine day he told her that he loved her. He hadnt planned for a proper proposal with a red rose and a mushy card which was the norm then but he simply told that he loves her when she asked why he was so lost for past few days. She dint agree to the proposal, he was adamant, she was depressed he was not giving it up, he couldnt see her depressed, he gave up, she came back but he couldnt. After that they grew apart and gradually lost touch.
Now here she was, the only woman he ever loved. He was never able to love any other woman, he never even tried to. He dint wanna get married for the sake of it and fool himself and the woman he would marry. He did enjoy being a bachelor but there are nights when he wished she was there with him. He was curious as to how her life might have shaped up. He wanted to know how she was doing. He paced quickly towards her and when he was a couple of yards away from her, he called "Hey Sweets, is that you ?"
P.S - I promise to post the part 2 in the next couple of days.
10 comments:
thats not fair... but anyways nice build up
"Its amazing how you always have a picture of people in your mind, how you capure their existence in your memories and expect them to remain that way for eternity."
very nicely said...
Am unable to shake an image off my mind reading your last 2 posts...I wonder why that is.....and I shall leave it at that....
@catch22,
Good start...dying to read the next. Man! you too don't cut things at the nick of time like the daily soaps.... just give it soon.
@ Monika & Rashmi - Part 2 is coming soon, but I guess what I have in mind may not be completed in just 2 parts, they mite take more.. :)
@ Raj-kris - Some images are better unseen like some voices are better unheard :)
As soon as I saw Part 1 in the title,I thought 'Yeah right, as though Part 2 is ever going to come'...And wanted to chide you about it.. But the foot note promise was sorta convincing...
Nice start.. Is there a reason behind this sudden intrest in matters of the heart ? Or is it a reluctant leaving of adolescense :-p
btw, your other blog on we-men seems to have absconded... why so ?
hi...ya dint write for quite long...actually i joined infy...so just got busy with life..wats up with u??
Beautiful, I felt like I was getting through the guy's heart; cant wait to read part 2 !
@ All - Am sorry couldn post the part 2 as promised met with small accident last weekend. Just ended up at home for past 3 days hence couldn do it. But the good news is I have started on it :)
@ Soliloquist - Just blame the music I am listening to and the moviez i am watching :). An the blog on Wee-men will be back with a bang ;)
@ Saira - Congrats on infy, where are u currently Blr or Mysore ?Heard infy training is heaven so have fun.
@ Divya - Hope Part 2 keeps up with the build up from part 2, thats the problem with sequels they alwasy disappoint ;). Hope mine doesnt :)
very good post...reminds me a lot abt ur life and my life to tell u the truth! And...u expect me to believe this is fiction huh. Die dude...die...
4 years!!
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